Thanks so much for visiting HipWriterMama, my blog about children's books, authors and readergirlz!

It's time for a change. I've decided to focus my attention on my writing blog, www.vivianleemahoney.com. Hope to see you there!


Monday, February 18, 2008

You Know You Have Their Attention When...

21 first graders miss five minutes of recess and don't mind a bit.

I still can't believe this talk with my daughter's first grade classmates went this well. And I have you to thank for it. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

When I first arrived in my daughter's classroom, I discovered Ms. Teacher reading a book to the class. Actually, she was holding up a book, while the children sat on the floor and listened to a book on tape. Some were paying attention to the story, interrupting to ask questions. Other children were goofing around. Ms. Teacher was irritated and kept telling them to sit down or to listen.

To be fair to Ms. Teacher, she has to work it if she wants these kids to pay attention. If she has an off day, she's doomed.  One length of the classroom is made entirely of windows with the most spectacular view. The playground. And I don't know about you, but I know if I had a chance to be a first grader all over again, and I had that view, I'd be counting down the seconds until I could climb that jungle gym or fly on the swings.

All I kept thinking was, if the kids are this antsy now, what are they going to be like listening to another book and even worse, a talk about taking care of books? Before their recess? Nothing like a little internal pressure...if I failed, I'd have one embarrassed daughter and first grade mutiny. From my classroom observations, I already identified the rabble rousers. And I knew the rest would follow along. Easily. I was the only person standing in the way of recess.

I thought about Tricia's mantra, "Feel the fear, but do it anyway." I didn't have a choice since Ms. Teacher introduced me to the children, so I figured I'd better sit down and look each one in the eye. Just so they knew I wasn't afraid. I especially paid attention to the rabble rousers. One of them grinned at me.

The kids were jumping up and down, they kept looking out the windows and they looked suspicious of anything I had to offer them. Thankfully, I remembered all your words of advice.

So I talked about books and how they start from dreams and ideas. Thank you to Liz in Ink and Becky Levine. Then inspired by Becky's idea, I had the children tell me their ideas for books and wrote them down. The kids were so excited talking about the good guys (themselves, comic superheroes, and animals), the bad guys (their siblings) and problems. They kept watching the list, and were thrilled their ideas made it to paper. They raised their hands, and for the most part, were good about waiting for their turn.

When we finally had all the ideas together, I looked at the children and then asked, "Who wants to throw away their idea?" (Also Becky's idea) Complete silence.

"What would happen if someone ripped this paper in half?"  If you ever want to see 21 first graders in shock, I'd suggest this question.  It is priceless.  

Once the kids recovered, they couldn't wait to talk about this.  

"No, this is my idea!" said one girl, standing up, ready to defend the paper.

"I have a great idea.  Nobody better ruin it," said a rabble rouser.

"That would be mean," said one boy.  And all the children agreed.  By this time, the kids were all standing up, edging closer to the paper, watching my every move.  

So I talked about how these ideas turn into books,  and how books are what keeps their imagination alive.  And these children got it.  They were bright eyed and hanging onto every word.

I asked the children if they ever watched the children's show, Charlie and Lola.  And they all smiled and said yes.  So I told them about their creator, Lauren Child, who my children adore. Quick note: If you're curious about the pictures of me on my blog, my children were inspired to draw these pictures because of Lauren Child's artwork.  

I then brought out a book, Who's Afraid of the Big Bad Book by Lauren Child.  Mme T, thank you for this suggestion.  I forgot about this book and it was perfect. Thankfully, I was able to find a copy at the school library.  I wasn't able to find Oliver Jeffer's book, The Incredible Book Eating Boy (recommended by Anamaria and Tricia).

Chris from The Simple of the Ordinary, Jonathan, and John Mutford suggested comparing a damaged book with a clean version.  I didn't have time to find a damaged book, so I ripped a sheet of construction paper and folded it over different pages so the children could see what they would be missing if a page was ripped.  Again, another aha! moment for them.

Then, I read the book to them.  Now I'm the type of person that loves to read books with different voices. My children love it.  So I acted the part of Herb, Goldilocks, the Three Bears.  Then there was Cinderella, the Stepmother, the Queen.  On and on I read.  And I had to ad lib a bit to hurry up the story when I realized it was almost time for recess.  

Not an eye left the book, not a sound could be heard, but my voice and the pages of the book.  I was thrilled.  I've never had the experience of having 42 eyes intent on a book, 21 children listening to every word, drawn into a world they could see.  It was truly inspiring.

I made up the ending, since I saw the first graders from the other classes run to the playground. I figured my daughter's classmates would want to get bogeying.  But, nobody looked outside. They didn't pay attention to their friends lining by the windows, peering in, curious about what was happening in the classroom.  I even told them it was time for recess and instead of getting their jackets to play, the children wanted to ask questions.  Ms. Teacher finally broke the spell, probably motivated by an afternoon with a group of first graders who haven't had a chance to release some energy.

Thank you, everyone.  You helped me make this talk on taking care of books an eye-opening experience for 21 first graders. Ms. Teacher asked me if I'd like to come back.  

"In a heartbeat," I said.  


m. thompson said...

Wow! Sounds like you did a fantastic job! Congrats!

Sara said...

Vivian, I hope that teacher hugged you. And every child, too. (If that's allowed.) Wow-ee. You changed a few lives this week.

Christine M said...

Yay, you! Good job well done!

Lisa said...

This is what teaching is all about! Congratulations. It's a lesson they will never forget! Mind if I share it with other teachers?

PJ Hoover said...

Sounds perfect! I'm so glad it went well :)

HipWriterMama said...

M. Thompson,
Thank you.

I hope this made a lasting impression on a couple of the children. But wow. It was something else.

Thanks. And thank you for your advice.

Sure, you're welcome to share this. If you would kindly credit everyone who helped me with this...the comment section link is provided in a few places in this post...that would be so appreciated.

I have a high respect for teachers. I spent only 35 minutes with the children and it was hard work.

Erin said...

Yay! And wow. Sounds like you did a wonderful job. :)

HipWriterMama said...

Hey, Tricia!
We both posted our comments at the same time. Thank you!

HipWriterMama said...

Miss Erin,
This is too funny. We posted at the same time, too. Thanks!

daphne grab said...

i am really impressed you had their attention for so long! it sounds like an amazing presentation- good for you!

Patty P said...

So funny! What a great idea for a presentation. Your daughter must have been proud!

Becky Levine said...

I'm so glad it went well! It is amazing to stand in front of those really little ones & see their eyes light up. I need to come up with a talk that might do a bit of that for the older ones, too!

Alkelda the Gleeful said...

This is great! I'm sorry I missed the initial call for ideas, but am so pleased you got enough material to make this work. What a lovely kidlitosphere we have.

Jen Robinson said...

I'm glad that it went so well, Vivian! I'm sure that you did an amazing job, and having such wonderful advice certainly helped, too, I'm sure. As Alkelda said, it's a lovely Kidlitosphere that we have. For sure.

Emmaco said...

Congratulations! That sounds like it was an amazing experience.

laurasalas said...

Wow--they didn't plow you down to get to recess! You know you had them in the palm of your hand. Excellent job!

Megan Germano said...

Congratulations! You did it! And with confidence.

Karen E. said...

Awesome! What an impression you made on them. Great story, great post.

Liz in Ink said...

Um, hellloooo Vivian. Changin' the world, one small step at a time...
Good on ya...

Cloudscome said...

Fabulous! You rock! And you tell the story so well... I can just see you there in front of that righteous crowd of first graders.

Susan T. said...

Brava! Take a bow, Vivian. Wish I could have heard you!

Sondra Santos LaBrie said...

When can you come visit my son's class? ;)